Thomas, you have an excellent report. It looked like you did your best to get as accurate a report as possible. What all you worked on helped make the report worth reading. The references of Octopuses as the symbol for Big Business was a good use of resources.
The problem with the report is that it seems as if you do not have footnotes for the side notes of your paper. What you can do to correct this mistake is just learn a little bit more about the program itself. Your references and topic discussion do not waiver, and all in all your mistakes are minor. Good Job!
Andrew
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